Weekend Word Prompt "Glacial" 6/16/19

Her eyes said it all. They were a brilliant unnatural blue, and completely glacial. I knew my attempted overture was being rejected and without any excuses or reasons. She felt no compunction to offer even a crumb to me. It was those eyes. I felt more contemptible the longer I dared hold her gaze. "I'll show myself out." Shutting the door, I knew it was forever.

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  1. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsJune 17, 2019 at 5:51 AM

    Dear Susan,

    This left me wanting to know more about her and why she's terminating the relationship. I could feel those cold eyes.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. DaleJune 18, 2019 at 6:39 AM

    That was well done! I, too, am left to wonder...

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